"Also, busy."
Ok, so I need to send an email to Chris and Ben (Y'know, the duo) and I think I have the email addresses of both, but I'll see.
Anyway, tally of all the stuff I can do in my spare time:
Swimming (Compulsory, so maybe that should go in the non-free-time-slot)
MTG
Origami (Modular style)
Helping various people with work (But that's more of a thing to do while doing work...hm)
Gaming (Mechanical Old Men, Desperate Top-down shooters, Various 2.5D fighters...etc.)
Article writing (Which goes in two places, cause I'm such the avaricious one, (exploring my vocab here, bear with me) and because I can write about no. 2 and 3. Mainly 3, but if 3, I think I'll add paper...template things. Kram, can I mark out lines on paper, and get you to scan them and add them to the back or something, so people can take them out and see where you need to fold, etc?)
Things that happened yesterday, but I forgot to mention.
Melt Sulfur = Sulfur blocks => SO2 + Scatterbrained Mr. Weston forgetting the extraction = 1/2 a period spent outside in the bid for fresh air.
And.....that's pretty much it. Besides relative velocities.
Things to do tonight:
English Annotation/Creative Writing (Postponed until further notice, maybe. I might actually write better when I'm not feeling so good. So maybe I'll write now.)
Math Sheet (Done. 7:15.)
Bio Sheet (Done. 8:00)
Physics Sheet (Done. Helped David with physics on the way, but it seems that my help is not wanted. God, I hate teaching. 9:15)
Everything else in my to do book is mostly optional. So, it occupies the time leftover when I finish these things.
English thoughts:
Figured out what felt wrong. The piece was too fast for my liking. Time to slow it down a lot.
Too much dialogue. Looks like I'm going to gut this piece.
Yes. I'm liking my redoing. It feels right.
I thought that I'd have enough anger to make any piece sound incredibly pessimistic, but it turns out that after all the posting, I'm just feeling hollow. Good enough.
Hm. Not good. Turning back to dialogue. I can imagine this going on for 5-6 revisions, maybe.
Time for maths now. I'll leave it as is, changes include:
Change of sex from male => female for protagonist
Cutting a character, so there's only 3 in the story atm. There was 4.
(The fifth man, the last man, is you.)
Upping the description and whimsical language use.
That's probably about it. I'll come back to it later.
Ah...Eugh Swimming tomorrow =/ It's inevitable though...sigh.
Hoping...I can write something good. I'm feeling a bit inadequate. Just a little.
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Write a full work when depressed and another when feeling good and meld them together. Actually keep both because the english faculty are stingy about too-depressing pieces.
It's kinda ok, because my writing style and thinking/speaking style is on the verbose side, for either effect, or a specific purpose, like disorientation, or for humor.
Of course, it does apply. Also, I have a feeling that my year 9 piece was written from a sense of wistfulness. And it was linear. No and no. I'll think of something...You better get a move on I think =O
Also, I just realised how much I love English.
I think I'm going to make my creative writing piece somewhat melancholic for this one. shouldn't be too hard, its only a few hundred words or so.
and my y9 piece reeked of dark satire and splattered cerebrum on the footpath.
Lol.
"A chromatographical distribution of gray matter against the dark gray of the pedestrian passageway."
Chromatography! And making up new words. I doubt an English teach is going to cross reference that one.
Today I was walking down the bus bay and ben and chris were behind me and did you ever realize how tall and intimidating they were? i was in they're year seven class, it wasn't like that then.
They seem a bit fidgety and awkward to me =O
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