Monday, March 7, 2011

Tell me why.

"Similarly..."

1. Need to make this short, have physics, bio, english to do, and then extra "optional" stuffs. The actual work I need to finish within 2 hours.
2. The name of the game is Essay Writing, and I have affirmation from teach that you are meant to use "I" once or twice to "personalise" the essay; that is, so that they don't think you're plagiarising. "That said, you've probably used it too early."
3. I think that's probably it.

Neku.

(In your face. Outta mine.)

Hoping I get my work done.
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5 comments:

JM said...

Either way, I wouldn't have said "I have studied [text], [text], etc" in the intro. Instead I would say that "[text] explores the concept of [idea], etc".

Did that make sense?

March 7, 2011 at 5:17 PM
icedtrees said...

What JM said.

March 7, 2011 at 5:42 PM
Toan said...

But then it's not individual, is it?

Haha.

March 7, 2011 at 5:45 PM
JM said...

Intro:

I am going to write an essay on the Human Condition. I have studied three poems and have picked my related text. My three poems are ___ ___ ___ and they all relate to my experiences and I am a human and therefore is linked with human condition. I like how the poems use alliteration and visual techniques (not really).

Individualised essays?

March 7, 2011 at 6:01 PM
Toan said...

Haha. Not that that extent. Once or twice, and as a contemporary context type reference.

At least, that's what he told me.

March 7, 2011 at 6:06 PM

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