"Just an ogre who cries~"
Ok. I've finished my practice essay, JM. So there. And it's only 12:14, but my mother is bugging me to do math =/
Which I'll get to in a second, just you wait.
What's my problem? Being too verbose. I've got a 1033 words essay, 4 texts, 5 paragraphs, and I need to cut it down to at least 900 or so. And it's 4 texts.
Kram tells me that I should cut context, but I don't really know, it's a part of meaning, therefore....
And then...well. If only I could bend the rules a little and have 2 body paragraphs instead of three, but I think that might just be cheating a bit TOO much.
Guess I'll have to ask someone who really knows. Pity I can't really discuss English that much with too many people without getting weird looks.
Also, new word: Synchronosis. Like Synthesis and Synchronise all in one. It's pretty cool.
And...carry over from Bio Excursion:
"Why don't we just catch the ducks and eat them? =.="
Neku.
Hoping I can figure out what to cut.
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My teacher suggests four. I'm lost. Also since they say we're doing the exam two weeks later than normal we might use the extra time to bum around with irrelevant stuff
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